The ugly baby’s been put to sleep
…and thank god, none too soon.
I actually re-read the story (not my usual M.O. in reviewing books) to see exactly what it was that I didn’t like so much. I discovered, aside from the crappy editing (for example, the hero asks a question, the heroine has three lines of internal thought, then a one-word response in quotation marks attached to the end of her thought…ack!!), I was disappointed that the author failed to deliver the premise.
The story started strong and romantic, but a few pages in, we get zinged with a gratuitous (and vivid/graphic) sex thought by the heroine–in the MIDDLE of a fight scene between the hero and her (bully) friend. Nothing the heroine had said, thought or done up to this point in the book was remotely graphic/erotic. Sensual, yes. But I swear (and didn’t write, though I wanted to), that it was as if the graphic thoughts were randomly inserted as if to make this story salable as an erotica.
Shame, too. Had such potential as a simple romance. Ah, well. I just signed up for three more books to review. One contemporary and two paranormal time travels. I’m hoping the ugly baby was the only one of the summer and that the rest of the reviews are smooth sailing.
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